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reminds me of your old stuff. Like really old stuff. Dance Machine anyone? lol

PERVOK responds:

I'm actually really glad that somebody remembers that song haha

i see a big review coming lol

normally the only time I give a BIG review is when the composition was amazing but stunk at the same time. Basically, this track has AMAZING Potential.

If this wasn't meant to be a remix, then you can probably ignore everything I say here lol. But the reason this remix is kinda not working is cause it's too close to the original. A remix is suppose to have elements of the original song so that it's recognizable while still being original on it's own.

Two main ideas I think that could be changed. 1. The solo at 2.05 be not ENTIRELY the original solo. Like if you made parts of it from your own samples. Could keep the original notes, but not original guitar sound. Or maybe layer another sound with the guitar maybe? I'm just saying it's too close to the original for a remix.

2. Which i kinda already mentioned earlier, it's too close to the original. One way I think that I can suggest to change that is to break it up. Literally take different snippets from the song and REarrange them. That's a remix.

I'm a big DF fan so I loved it anyway lol. Funny how I love trance and dance msic too. I'm jealous of your techno skills right now actually. I've been trying to write stuff and it never sounds this good lol.

So in final for you song, I think you're about half done. Maybe 3/4 in my (unanchored) opinion. So keep it at. Think of yourself as a professional. They're picky, cocky and picky. Not to mention a perfectionist. Ya I said picky twice lol.

Keep it ReaL,
UMSL
P.S. if i sound kinda off it's cause I'm doing final projects for school and it's another all nighter for me. I think I've been up close to 40 hours now haha. I'ma lil loopy hehe.

ZachPayne responds:

First off thank you very much for taking the time to write this! That's so awesome :D . And thank you for all the input it really helps me improve. Yes, it's meant to be a remix, but I didn't really want to make it sound drastically different I wanted to have certain elements the same. But I do see where you're coming from and maybe I can improve it! Again thank you very much.

very nice

Between the title and the music, I get the image of walking through a very dark building, like the eerie basement and being lost, alone and not knowing where to go but just got to get out of there somehow. Fear at every turn, but you're not being chased. Just over adrenaline and your thoughts.

Very plain jane and good for your first song :) And if you say you're going to make music on how your feeling and such, I can't wait to hear what you'll produce when you've moved on from your past and when you've stopped hurting.

Keep it REaL,
UMSL

erSoulFire responds:

Thank You ^_^

sweetness

Loved it, saw it on "Feeling" contest even though it was the wrong one lol. One thing I'd like to say, ya, it's a long song already (maybe) but I think you could have dragged out the ending and tapered it off IMO instead of just ending. Didn't feel complete to me.

But kudos to you man and who ever else was involved. It's awesome! Great job to the singer! Keep singin, you'll only get better ;)

Keep it REaL,
UMSL
5/5 10/10

itsfoxhall responds:

Thanks, but as it's for the represent a country contest It's limited to 3.50, there is a full version to this song however, which is 5.02, and it'll be avaliable on an album i'll be releasing later this year :)

check the myspace.com/sownshadowfox for details (Y)

*drop jaw*

Aboslutely stunning. I'd say more but wow... I would love to hear a real ochestra play this. You should make a band score :P probably don't even know what I'm talkin about

Keep it REaL,
UMSL
(Judge of "Feelings Of Music")
P.S. This review is off record. I just had to write lol ;)

Xyirx responds:

Oh, thank you very much for being a judge in this contest. I'm very grateful to have new listeners. :)

I just started writing orchestra songs few months ago, so hehheh, I don't think I'm that good to write symphonic orchestra scores yet.^^;

Thanks again for coming to listen to my song.

wow O.o

That was great. If I didn't read the Comments i wouldn't have gotten it :P I really enjoyed all of them. Like the guy below asked, can we get longer versions of those loops? They're great on they're own already :D Great potential for each. it's almost like advertising ;)

Keep it REaL,
UMSL

Kr1z responds:

You can check out every part on the user's their personal profile..
Thanks for the review!!

loved it

It was a great reminder of that graet song. But personally I liked FL2 better than this one (FL3) And yet, you still manage to make incredible music none-the-less. You aren't following the pattern of those disney where if they make a sequel it sucks :P

It was good, had be bobbin'
Keep it REaL,
UMSL

Kr1z responds:

Thanks man!

great!

Though, what did you do to chnage the quality of this song. It does seem like you added anything new, just mastered it, right? What did you do? Inquiring mind wants to know :P Mayhap you should do that to the other two too.

Keep it REaL,
UMSL
10/10 5/5 [3.58 / 5.00 (+ 0.23)]

Hotplurplegnome responds:

yeah your right i just mastered it:D
and thanks for the review:P

w00t!

Vary cool! I love this type of stuff :D You and DJ-Immune man! Ya! Keep it up! I love it. Review Passionate Playing if you please :P

The ending... wasn't too shabby. Though i don't think a quiet cut off worked with this song. And actually, before that heavey bassdrum drop at the end, it sounded like a... crap what's that called... not a transition but a build up point, or a soft point where it sort of changes into something else before it gets good again... right... that's what it sounded like... if I remeber the name I'll PM ya or something :P (not a chorus, verse? nope... darnit!)

Though, ending it with a piano was the best idea if you were... I think this one can go on longer... or maybe I'm listening to too much DJ-Imune... his are t3h like 8 min :P

I really really enjoyed it!

Keep it REaL,
UMSL
10/10 5/5 [4.02 / 5.00 (+ 0.14)]

DJ-Martcore responds:

Thanx dude !
I Don't even know what it is xD
But thanx anyway for the super awesome review
You'll see me again!

-DJ Martcore

nice man!

I really liked the begining melody. It was awesome how it was a long string of notes that wasn't exactly repetative in sequence. Like, the melody didn't consist of a few notes, then those same notes in a diff key, then a diff key again... that's prety common. That's what give this a "Great!"

But I -1 cause I thought the part with the vocal "E- E- E-" (1.00-1.15) could have had more to it... If you're not going to change much on that part, perhaps a dynmaic volume change to keep people listening at that part.

Keep it REaL,
UMSL
9/10 5/5 [4.46 / 5.00 (+ 0.0090)]
thnx for the review of Passionate Playing! much appreciated considering I'm not popular ;P

DJ-VIZ responds:

Thanks for the rev! ... yeah the vox are alittle corny, but hey im trying to make my songs sound somewhat professional. thanks for the review again, and ill check by your page to see if anythings new

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